Says/Does Analysis


(I) The first example comes from an articles titled "Capitalism and the Rule of Law" by George Roch. Management instructor Ron Schloemer uses this article in his MGT 111 course.

Paragraph 1: Says: Law and economics are inseparable. Does: Introduces the main issues of the article. Uses rhetorical questions to situate the reader during a particular historical period - the American Revolution.

Paragraph 2: Says: Great Britain imposed taxation without representation upon the American colonists. Does: Further develops the example of the American Revolution introduced in paragraph 2.

"Economic Liberties and the Constitution" (subheading)

Paragraph 3: Says: Tells about the rise of the Continental Congress of 1774 and 1775 and the role of George Washington and John Adams. Does: Starts the history of the early American republic and the origins of American capitalism.


(II) The second example comes from Jack Malone's MGT 111 class. Here, we have analyzed the first few paragraphs of a speech on business ethics by P&G CEO John Pepper.

Paragraph 1: Says: Thanks the audience for allowing him to be here. Does: Introduces himself to the audience.

Paragraph 2: Says: A long-standing relationship exists between P&G and Florida A&M. Does: Develops credibility. Establishes ties with the school. Builds bridge between himself and his audience.

Paragraph 3: Says: Florida A&M and its students are important to P&G. Does: Continues to establish relationship by looking to the future.

Paragraph 4: Says: He will address what it takes to compete and win in a global market. Does: Introduce the topics, setting up the function of ethics. Sets up his speech.

Paragraph 5: Says: The theme of the speech is business ethics. Does: Acts as a transition from setting up the speech to introducing the main theme.

Paragraph 6: Says: If you want to succeed globally in business, you should act ethically. Does: Links the theme to topics mentioned in #4. Also, sets up the structure of the body of his speech.


(III) Our last example comes from Jim Fenske's MGT 111 class. The article is "Beyond the Information Revolution" by Peter F. Drucker.

Paragraph 1: Says: There have been surprising and profound effects of e-commerce on business practice and social and political thought. Does: Introduces topic/idea about the surprising importance of e-commerce for the "Information Revolution."

Paragraph 2: Says: Gives two examples to support the unpredictability of emerging industry. Does: Suggests that the phenomena of e-commerce and other unexpected industries have historical precedent.

Paragraph 3: Says: That new major industries will undoubtedly emerge from unique technology systems, but that it is impossible to predict what they might be. Does: Attempts to unravel the too often assumed connection between the rise of the information revolution and new industry.

Paragraph 4: Says: Although his ideas are only predictions, they are already following a pattern set by the Industrial Revolution. Does: Introduces his attempt to historicize the emergence of e-commerce and compare the Information Revolution with the Industrial Revolution.

Paragraph 5 Says: When compared to the Information Revolution, which is assumed to be unprecedented, the Industrial Revolution's (specifically as triggered by the steam engine) rate of production and its impact on consumer and political interests in the Industrial Revolution was equally significant. Does: Supplies examples of the steam engine's effect on various industry to demonstrate that, as a trigger and symbol, the microchip's economic and social trajectory is not unique.



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